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Antique Hidden Treasures by ~Bexica:iconBexica:



A key turned in a lock,
Rust creeps from hole to hand
Cracks splinter from wrist to floor,
They both fit? Although these doors shriek?
Shudder and pump lead
Tongues of metallic heat feverishly loving me back,
Winding themselves through leg and arm
Held cold, immobile - against what?

Blinking in unison thousands of lashes
Feathery frames malting like dandelion seeds,
Rendering my lungs opaque, clogged with breathy wishes.
The unnerving flick of identical irises
Washing themselves over each limb,
Tongues lick; eyes in the walls
Ears twist the broken light fixtures, straining for sound.
Sides rub themselves tirelessly as fingers caress,
The antiquity - not the flesh.

I writhe against trembling lips
Which stutter sweetness but never utter a kiss.
Identical digits reading brail off my hips,
Sensations are dead, metal on the mind.
Beyond the barred up window a head floats
Banging like a headboard against the cobwebs,
Extremities curled tight around hollow hips,
Sagging shoulders, putty bones -
My shattered voice and tired tears,
Make no dent against the chest that would not open.
©2008-2009 ~Bexica
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Daily Deviation, 2008-05-15

Daily DeviationYour reactions will certainly vary as you are reading Antique Hidden Treasures by ~Bexica. There is a wondrous blend here of emotional strength, beauty, and imagery. (Suggested by =Lostindamnation and Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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hmmm... guarding our carnal treasure, are we?

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Tots and Teens: The Children's Literature Contest --Amazing literature and amazing prizes!! :typerhappy:
like a fox on viagra.

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In what furnace was they brain?
Hey, kiddo.

I'm using this poem in my senior paper to exemplify how poetry posted online utilizes imagery. No worries, you're being cited completely. If you don't want me to use your poem, let me know asap, ok?

P.S. Sorry if "kiddo" offends you. Let me know about that too, ok? :D

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Are you sure which side of the glass you are on?
Kiddo's fine, as is using the poem,

Just use my proper name =)

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In what furnace was they brain?
Righto. Will do!

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Are you sure which side of the glass you are on?
Congratulations on the DD; it was well-earned!

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"Censorship is to art as lynching is to justice"
-Henry Louis Gates
I don't believe I've encountered a piece so artfully indulgent in many, many years. Detached within, exposed without, but shielded just beneath the surface. Your articulate imagery is beautiful. Never stop writing.

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auroch

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L-O-V-E it!!! :heart:

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"If greatness of purpose, smallness of means and astounding results are the three criteria of human genius, who could claim to compare any great man in modern history with Muhammad?"
(Lamartine, Histoire de la Turquie)

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