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Antique Hidden Treasures by ~Bexica:iconBexica:



A key turned in a lock,
rust creeps from hole to hand -
cracks splinter from wrist to floor.

They both fit? Although these doors shriek?
Tongues shudder and pump lead -
metallic heat, feverish, loving;
winding themselves through leg and arm,
held cold, immobile - against what?

Blinking in unison, thousands of lashes,
feathery frames malting like dandelion seeds,
rendering my lungs opaque,
clogged with breathy wishes.

The unnerving flick of identical irises
rinsing themselves over each limb,
bones click; eyes in the walls,
ears twist the light fixtures, straining for sound.

Sensations are dead, metal on the mind,
a head floats -
banging like a headboard.

I writhe against trembling lips,
stuttering sweetness -
she never utters a kiss
identical digits reading brail off my hips;
sides rub themselves tirelessly as fingers caress,
the antiquity - not the flesh.
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Given 2008-05-15

Your reactions will certainly vary as you are reading Antique Hidden Treasures by ~Bexica. There is a wondrous blend here of emotional strength, beauty, and imagery. (Suggested by =Lostindamnation and Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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:iconbatousaijin:
hmmm... guarding our carnal treasure, are we?

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:iconbexica:
like a fox on viagra.

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the sun does rise
:iconlostindamnation:
Hey, kiddo.

I'm using this poem in my senior paper to exemplify how poetry posted online utilizes imagery. No worries, you're being cited completely. If you don't want me to use your poem, let me know asap, ok?

P.S. Sorry if "kiddo" offends you. Let me know about that too, ok? :D

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Are you sure which side of the glass you are on?
:iconbexica:
Kiddo's fine, as is using the poem,

Just use my proper name =)

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:iconlostindamnation:
Righto. Will do!

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:iconduessa:
Congratulations on the DD; it was well-earned!

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:icontaokore:
I don't believe I've encountered a piece so artfully indulgent in many, many years. Detached within, exposed without, but shielded just beneath the surface. Your articulate imagery is beautiful. Never stop writing.

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:iconserene13-27:
L-O-V-E it!!! :heart:

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