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Haiku: Linguistics by ~Bexica:iconBexica:



I am a verb, flushed
Hot, wet - naked on the tip
of  your  tongue; do me.
©2007-2010 ~Bexica
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I love words.
They are so clever.

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:iconyumelenawawe:
Very powerful for the three lines that it is. It's like a... tasty explosion in ones mouth.

I'm probably not making sense in my sick delirium, but I like the poem.
:iconbexica:
"a... tasty explosion in ones mouth"

I LOVE THAT LINE!
=)

sick delirium? are you okay?


(thanks!)xx

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the sun does rise
:iconbatousaijin:
LOL! :rofl: BRILLIANT!

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:iconbexica:
^^

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the sun does rise
:iconupside-soul27:
It sounds so delicious.
So short and yet still contain a very hot feeling.
:heart:

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Now ask me if there's water in hell.
:iconbexica:
Thats what I wanted it to do
to excetuate the irony between 'verb' and 'do me'
the innuendo aflame
and spurting sexuality all over the carpet =P

messy thing...

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the sun does rise
:iconyumelenawawe:
I've got one of those wonderful change-of-season colds. So my muscles and joints are all weak and my nose is runny. I've kind of been in half-asleep mode all day. :O_o:

Heehee. I'm glad you liked the line. Maybe one or both of us can use it later, neh?
:iconsaltheart:
envious intoxication

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Gods do not know pain...

-Unless by chance they fall in love
:iconapocalove:
i love it :) it's a really good haiku (not sure how you spell it :/) see you tonight:)

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:) Imagination is more important than knowledge- Albert Einstein :)

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