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Linguistics by ~Bexica:iconBexica:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Erotic > Spoken Word


I am a verb, flushed
Hot, wet - naked on the tip
of  your  tongue; do me.
©2007-2009 ~Bexica
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I love words.
They are so clever.
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~YumeLenawawe:iconYumeLenawawe: Nov 20, 2007, 1:54:15 PM
Very powerful for the three lines that it is. It's like a... tasty explosion in ones mouth.

I'm probably not making sense in my sick delirium, but I like the poem.
~Bexica:iconBexica: Nov 20, 2007, 1:59:15 PM
"a... tasty explosion in ones mouth"

I LOVE THAT LINE!
=)

sick delirium? are you okay?


(thanks!)xx

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In what furnace was they brain?
*batousaijin:iconbatousaijin: Nov 20, 2007, 2:07:59 PM
LOL! :rofl: BRILLIANT!

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~Bexica:iconBexica: Nov 20, 2007, 2:24:32 PM
^^

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In what furnace was they brain?
~upside-soul27:iconupside-soul27: Nov 20, 2007, 3:28:20 PM
It sounds so delicious.
So short and yet still contain a very hot feeling.
:heart:

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Now ask me if there's water in hell.
~Bexica:iconBexica: Nov 20, 2007, 4:13:23 PM
Thats what I wanted it to do
to excetuate the irony between 'verb' and 'do me'
the innuendo aflame
and spurting sexuality all over the carpet =P

messy thing...

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In what furnace was they brain?
~YumeLenawawe:iconYumeLenawawe: Nov 20, 2007, 5:36:04 PM
I've got one of those wonderful change-of-season colds. So my muscles and joints are all weak and my nose is runny. I've kind of been in half-asleep mode all day. :O_o:

Heehee. I'm glad you liked the line. Maybe one or both of us can use it later, neh?
~Saltheart:iconSaltheart: Nov 20, 2007, 10:55:06 PM
envious intoxication

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Gods do not know pain...

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~apocalove:iconapocalove: Nov 21, 2007, 6:21:45 AM
i love it :) it's a really good haiku (not sure how you spell it :/) see you tonight:)

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